Four Dorks[Zelda Sprite Comic]

[Green]

Four guys, one girl. Four 'master swords', one quest! Which goes best, depends on who you ask, Red, Green, Blue, or Purple. Four dorks is a sprite comic about there adventures in Zeldas Pants Hyrule!
fourswords.thecomicseries.com/comics/first

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[ManaBlitz]

I read your comic, and one thing that was kind of weird right away is that your panels are HUGE. Make the panels smaller and the sprite bigger and you'll be fine. I'd also suggest using speech bubbles instead of colour-coded text on top of the panel.

The dialogue is fine, and there aren't any typoes or anything so that's good.

[spinnerlink]

Same as above.

I am a terrible speller, so i hope i don't have any typos.